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Friday, May 26, 2006

From the eyes of an outsider

When you feel like,
All your strength has gone.
But your reasonin' says,
You must still carry on.

When no one's close enough,
to kiss the tears off your eyes.
You can take it, you can face it,
After all guys don't cry.

There's no miracle,
No magic carpet.
You must stand,
Back on your feet.

Your dreams are,
A touch away.
And you are tired of,
This worldly deceit.

After all was lost,
You were left on your own.
Remained a burnin' scar,
Never to be shown.

Won the hearts of many,
Pages of past torn.
Yet at the corner of your world,
You stand alone.

Lookin' from the eyes of an outsider,
I see the world hustlin' by you.
Darin' to unbelong, carryin' just,
the faded memories and the sky, insanely blue.


  • i dunno wat to say man.......ur pretty much as fucked up as u can get ( i hope.....)yaar, sambhal apne aap ko.......shady really cares bout u man.......do ur supplementary well.......if only 4 her sake......
    take care

    By Blogger completebhejafry, at May 28, 2006 1:09 PM  

  • I thought you are closing down the blog ?
    anyways..well written.
    Take care,do well.


    By Blogger Axiomate, at May 28, 2006 10:30 PM  

  • Don't worry be happy! :)

    By Blogger Has to be me, at May 29, 2006 6:21 PM  

  • Sometimes i wonder if we can just be an observer b let all things whiz by.. but NO.. we got to be in the middle n face all the hardships n sweat our asses off.. after all tht the satisfaction u did it is also gud
    so come back in the world rather than watching it alone..

    but nice lines..

    n thnx forstopping by my space.. c ya around

    By Blogger Sudeep, at May 29, 2006 9:21 PM  

  • loser!!
    but ur blog, rocks!

    By Blogger Neha, at May 30, 2006 10:04 AM  

  • hi mr dog..
    howja doin..stupid question.. i know you arent doin well.. very nice poem.. describes your state..

    i hate you man.. i really do..
    study well..
    dont waste too much time on the comp..

    By Blogger shraddha, at May 30, 2006 5:46 PM  

  • BhejaFry, cracked yes, rather I got cracked, freakin' paper.

    Has to be Me, tryin' to get that into my head.. nice pic though..

    Sudeep, thats the problem, far easier writin' from the eyes of an outsider.

    Neha, come up with better words, wouldja, and thanks!

    Shaaaady,you take care to instead of drivin' everyone to the walls, jesus, you do study hard yaar, how do you do it?

    By Blogger Gates, at May 31, 2006 5:07 PM  

  • I enjoyed this new tempalte of yours....
    btw wht happend suddenly change in blog URL n templates...

    blog mein kuch kaala dikh raha hai mujhe :P

    By Blogger Arz000n, at June 04, 2006 2:35 PM  

  • ArZoon, you are goin' over your head...thanks, i love the layout too..

    By Blogger Gates, at June 07, 2006 2:19 PM  

  • nice poem, well written or well expressed..or watever! its nice!
    take care dodo!

    every situation can be looked at from two angles... one as an observer n the other in its shoes... the solution to the problem depends on how one looked at it!!!

    keep good work going!

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at June 09, 2006 8:48 PM  

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