With love for you as fillin'
I could give ya a heart,
Moulded outta clay.
To express everythin'
I wanna say.
I could give ya a heart,
Cut from sweet smellin' paper.
To write eternally yours,
My love will never taper.
I could give ya a heart,
Blown from delicate glass.
To remind you its pure,
Everytime you walked pass.
I could give you a heart,
Melted in gold.
To solidify brilliance,
Of what our future holds.
I could give ya a heart,
Formed from chocolate sweet.
To give you a feelin'
That life is complete.
I could give ya a heart,
Made of so many things.
Instead, I shall give ya mine,
With love for you as its fillin'
Yes, the photo is lovely. I will make it clear. I'm not answerin' any question regardin' who is the girl, or anythin' near it.
11 Comments:
Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy .....
thanx for stopping by ....
read a couple of ur poems ... *ahem* i reserve my comments ... dont want my sysad marking my system for its language content
By ~*. D E E P A .* ~, at January 17, 2006 5:06 PM
@ not smoking : Good choice
@ pictured ur crush naked : U said ," pictured .. nope " ... does it mean u have seen ur crush so ?
Well , *ahem* forget it !
By ~*. D E E P A .* ~, at January 17, 2006 5:09 PM
Loved the pic...
Awesome pose...
NF
By Axiomate, at January 18, 2006 1:11 PM
Wonderful !
By Anonymous, at January 19, 2006 3:34 PM
Deepa, sorry not able to benefit from your comments, I guess it saved a lotta trouble on sys-ad's part as well.
NF, my thoughts alike.
Anon, glad you liked it.
By Prax, at January 19, 2006 9:14 PM
hey thnx for stopping by.
n abt ur poem ...its too good!
By Anonymous, at January 19, 2006 10:10 PM
Good one!
Guess am allowed to ask ... whoz da guy? :P :P
By Łóòň Ġãĺ, at January 21, 2006 9:25 PM
Archie, glad you liked it.
Cheesy, you are so much like a friend of mine who is buggin' me with the same question :-0
By Prax, at January 22, 2006 10:22 AM
an xcellent poem...if its ur creation...cheers to u gates!!!
pic:just amazing!!!
no Questions...no comments either:
but just for recognition.."just b urself..n u neednt justify any of ur acts to any1"
i guess u got who i am!!!n my identity was meant only 4 u!!!
way to go dude!!!
By Anonymous, at January 26, 2006 8:15 PM
Anon, thanks for stoppin' by
By Prax, at January 26, 2006 8:20 PM
I can't help checkin' this post everytime i drop by ur blog!
Hey!just to say again-i love this post!It rocks!!! n jus' doesnt agree to get outta my mind!!
I'll leave as "Anon" only;
no recognition needed;i'm sure u know who it is!
By Anonymous, at October 30, 2006 6:47 PM
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